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Friday, 10 February 2017

Jack finds a friend

Jack was trying to find a friend. When Jack was trying  to find a friend created a friend  he put mile but it will not work so he wesome tape to do the snt to sat on the log and some iend a  him and they  became  friends. The plugged together and the robot went home  with her. They hold hands because they matched the san
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2 comments:

  1. Clarelle Carruthers12 February 2017 at 17:53

    Hi Yolanda, I really like the way you have ended your story. Your ending painted a picture in my head of two very happy robots. I can't wait to read your next story. Keep writing creative stories Yolanda.
    From Miss Davis

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  2. zoe21 February 2017 at 18:04

    hi yolanda i love your witing from zoe

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