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Wednesday, 21 November 2018

Peer edit

Hi My name is Yolanda and my animation this term is all about cave drawing. My animation is all about Kearn and Mary going to the beach in Samoa in the darkness. Once upon a time Kearn and Mary were going to a sandy beach in the darkness and when they saw this large thing so they went near it.It made a large noise so when they walked in and they saw a Moa the Moa and 2 girls walked and saw people walking with a knife and so they threw the knife at the moa and the girls said ho no!! What's going on. The girls didn’t know what was happening to the Moa. The next day!!! The girls went back in the darkness and saw some white stars up in the dark sky. The moa was sleeping so when he was sleeping they just tidied up the blood on the ground. So when the girls went back the man was about to throw the knife the girls went and grabbed the knife Mary and Kearn jumped at the same time that was really lucky that the girls got the knife and saved the day.
Thanks for watching my cave art animation hope you enjoyed.
Today me and my Aaliyah edited it writing and we worked together to peer edit we read each others writing and Aaliyah read mine and I read her's. here is the writing we did.Writing Task

Monday, 19 November 2018

Term 4 Animation

Talofa lava hope you enjoy my animation!! Hi My name is Yolanda and my animation this term is all about cave drawing. My animation is all about Kearn and Mary going to the beach in Samoa in the darkness. Once upon a time Kearn and Mary were going to a sandy beach in the darkness and when they saw this substantial thing to they went near it and it made a substantial noise so when they walked in and they saw the Moa the Moa and the 2 girls walked and saw people walk with the knife and they throw it to the moa so the girls said ho no!! Was going on. So the girls didn’t know what was happening to the Moa. The next day!!! The girls went back in the darkness and saw the moa sleeping so when he was sleeping the girls saw the moa and the person they saw the knife and the person throw the knife and the ground had blood all over the floor so the girls didn’t do anything they just lift the blood on the ground. So when the girls went back the man was about to throw it I went and grabbed the knife Mary and Kearn jumped both at the same time that was really lucky that the girls got the knife. Fa'afetai lava for watching my animation hope you enjoyed it.here is the link to my writing task.
Writing Task for week 6

Thursday, 15 November 2018

Narrative Part 2





Once upon a time, me and my cousins Maylanna,Mary, Jk, Yolanda and Maria. We all went to Samoa then we went up North and then to Australia then we went back to Samoa and lived in a hotel in Samoa. When we were at Samoa Maria drove us to Savaii and we were really elevated to go when we were there so when we went in the car we went pass this place it was made out of crusty brick so all of the cousins asked Maria if they can go back to the mysterious things. When we got out of the car we saw a mysterious time machine and they all thought of that there is a monstrosity in here so when they went they saw rusty gears, cobblestone and a mysterious tunnel up.





They saw a crusty brown mountain and when they were looking up the sky the saw the sky streaming through the clouds and there was a moonlight shining out. So they went and up the dried mountain and started to look up the sky they said that glistening were through the clouds and the moonlight was bringing the sun down so that the sun is set and is bright like the color yellow but lighter and the sunset is lovely.


When Maylanna,Mary and Jk were standing there something was moving so they were to scared to jump to they called for help because we didn’t know what was happening with them do we just called out for help so we turned around and said to each other what should we do? So Maria and Yolanda said should we jumped up high and had a rope to jump and let the rope go up high so that they can as high as they can jump and get the rope and jump back down so then when we jumped they jumped as high so when they jumped they fell down and came down to us. We didn’t know the way back so Maylanna looked and she saw the way so she called out come this why so after that we went back up North and all lived happily ever after.

This is what we had to write about and my righting was about me and my cousins having fun in Samoa but they see something cool and they want to go there but they think of different things like scary things like monsters that lived in there. I hope enjoy reading about my narrative part 2.

Wednesday, 14 November 2018

Narrative writing plan



This is my Writing Plan and it was so hard because I had to work all by myself and it was all about a tower.

Thursday, 8 November 2018

DMIC



First me and my maths class timed  so we did 28x63=
then we did  6x200=1200 
6x80=480
28x3=84
 then 20x3=608x3=24

Thats how we got our video.

Tuesday, 6 November 2018

My Mother's Coat


This is my reading and the story and it is all about the girl about her coat and it was so easy that I finished it all by myself.

Monday, 5 November 2018

Multiplication and Division


This is my maths and we had to do times it with the other number and  you will have to compare the other number to make get the answer it was so easy that I worked all by myself and I sometimes help others who help me.