Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence: On a dark, freezing, frosty and muddy day I start to put warm beautiful colorful scarves and long and the weather was so disgusting as bad as I could imagine water dropping into my head feeling like I was dreaming about an angry person that got all muddy. The rain was dropping on my body and I
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: I went to the beautiful beach to see the rocky shore. The water color was bright blue sea. The trees looked like it was falling on the light sandy sandy sand. The light sand went in between my toes and it spread all around my toes.
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: Carol brought new cool shoes that were brand new. They were ripping it started to look as ugly as a pig looks like. The color of the shoe were looked painful because it was muddy and the laces looked terrible and made carol feel disappointed at her own shoes.
Show sentence: Carol brought new cool shoes that were brand new. They were ripping it started to look as ugly as a pig looks like. The color of the shoe were looked painful because it was muddy and the laces looked terrible and made carol feel disappointed at her own shoes.
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