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Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end.  It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.

Image Attributions: Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere. Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.

Begin Writing Here:
part 1

Once a upon a time,  it was sunny day. There was a girl name Lesher she liked to go outside at air balloon then one day there she found a air balloon outside her house and she was so excited.  It had 1000,s of the balloons on it then she started to fly on the balloon then she was up in the sky then after that s h e Falls on ground then she was crying out loud and people were laughing at her and she was wanting for help from her then Jane  came and said do you need help and they were saying no next she said what happened because she saw lesher crying and she heard someone was crying then people were walking and laughing at her then Jane asked her what what happened to you than she told her what happened. But she was so kind to her.


part 2

The next day lesher wanted to look for airplanes but

nothing was up on the sky so she watched tv. She fell asleep she was dreaming about airplanes  so after she slept she woke back up the next day she was a airplane she was so surprised so she went on it and she flew up  on the sky. Her airplane crash to another airplane she was like no I am going to fall on the ground so then she fell on the ground crying she  broke her leg and arm she needed to hospital so a teacher from pt england called the ambulance to come and get her. So the ambulance came and took her to hospital and they said her arm was broken and her leg was broken so she had to stay there for 15 days so then after her 15 days are over she can go back home and she was not allowed to go on airplanes  anymore so then she went back and said to the teacher thank for helping me you are a kind teacher at pt england school the kids were having fun all over the place so then she went back home and was wishing to go on a airplane.

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Thank you

Work through this checklist before posting your writing onto your blog:

I have:
1	Downloaded my brainstorm as a JPEG to share on my final blog post.
2	I have had a friend read my writing to check the sentences make sense and that I have used capital letters and full stops.
3	I have had a friend read my writing to check I have used paragraphs correctly.
4	I have used descriptive vocabulary which helps to paint a picture for my audience.

Once you are finished… Make sure your blog post includes: JPEG of your planning A copy of the picture you choose to write about (correctly attributed) AND a picture which you have drawn to go with your writing. Your story from above Add these labels to your writing. Can you think of any others you could add?         2018, Writing, Narrative, Flight, Ako 3 Copy the URL to your blog post and paste it to the blog log.