Today we had to show what we can write when when we have 40 minutes to write without talking to others. we were able to work quietly to complete the task.
Once a upon a time there was a girl name yolanda and her friend Keyanna and Julieanna and kiarah. They went and grabbed a bucket and put some water in it then when they came back they put the bucket down the ground.
When they left it there and went on a ride at rainbows end a bees were in the bucket and they drank the water from the bucket it looked so dirty that it had grass in the bucket and the water turned green and it was smelly. After the bees drank the bucket of water they left it smelly and dirty they were so excited and at the beginning when the water the were like that looks cool let's drink it so they did then they said that tastes great.
After them a bird came along and drank the and they were saying yummy good for my tamy it looked so gross that they didn’t care about it. Then it turned yellow.
After that a rabbit came and was looking at the water the rabbit was scared that someone will eat him but he still drank the water then when it saw a bird he fort that they will come and scary him away so then he ran away with the bucket because he didn’t want anyone to no that he was the one that to the bucket. He put his mouth in there and drank it so yummy.
Next a donkey came and saw the bucket laying around and when he looked at it he went to it and the rabbit was not there and he drank it when he drank it he saw the rabbit coming to it so then he ran away and then the rabbit took it away again.
Next a roster came and saw the bucket laying around so then he went to it then he saw the people having heaps of fun and he was thing if a person comes and find me drinking it I am going to run away from him and tell them to stop it.
Then a cow came and saw a bucket of water so then he came to it and it is so fresh I am going to drink it. It tastes so nice that I am going to take it with me.
After julieanna and me and keyanna lot there bucket of water then they went and grabbed it from the roster then they got it back.
Once a upon a time there was a girl name yolanda and her friend Keyanna and Julieanna and kiarah. They went and grabbed a bucket and put some water in it then when they came back they put the bucket down the ground.
When they left it there and went on a ride at rainbows end a bees were in the bucket and they drank the water from the bucket it looked so dirty that it had grass in the bucket and the water turned green and it was smelly. After the bees drank the bucket of water they left it smelly and dirty they were so excited and at the beginning when the water the were like that looks cool let's drink it so they did then they said that tastes great.
After them a bird came along and drank the and they were saying yummy good for my tamy it looked so gross that they didn’t care about it. Then it turned yellow.
After that a rabbit came and was looking at the water the rabbit was scared that someone will eat him but he still drank the water then when it saw a bird he fort that they will come and scary him away so then he ran away with the bucket because he didn’t want anyone to no that he was the one that to the bucket. He put his mouth in there and drank it so yummy.
Next a donkey came and saw the bucket laying around and when he looked at it he went to it and the rabbit was not there and he drank it when he drank it he saw the rabbit coming to it so then he ran away and then the rabbit took it away again.
Next a roster came and saw the bucket laying around so then he went to it then he saw the people having heaps of fun and he was thing if a person comes and find me drinking it I am going to run away from him and tell them to stop it.
Then a cow came and saw a bucket of water so then he came to it and it is so fresh I am going to drink it. It tastes so nice that I am going to take it with me.
After julieanna and me and keyanna lot there bucket of water then they went and grabbed it from the roster then they got it back.
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