Narrative Part 2

Once upon a time, me and my cousins Maylanna,Mary, Jk, Yolanda and Maria. We all went to Samoa then we went up North and then to Australia then we went back to Samoa and lived in a hotel in Samoa. When we were at Samoa Maria drove us to Savaii and we were really elevated to go when we were there so when we went in the car we went pass this place it was made out of crusty brick so all of the cousins asked Maria if they can go back to the mysterious things. When we got out of the car we saw a mysterious time machine and they all thought of that there is a monstrosity in here so when they went they saw rusty gears, cobblestone and a mysterious tunnel up.





They saw a crusty brown mountain and when they were looking up the sky the saw the sky streaming through the clouds and there was a moonlight shining out. So they went and up the dried mountain and started to look up the sky they said that glistening were through the clouds and the moonlight was bringing the sun down so that the sun is set and is bright like the color yellow but lighter and the sunset is lovely.


When Maylanna,Mary and Jk were standing there something was moving so they were to scared to jump to they called for help because we didn’t know what was happening with them do we just called out for help so we turned around and said to each other what should we do? So Maria and Yolanda said should we jumped up high and had a rope to jump and let the rope go up high so that they can as high as they can jump and get the rope and jump back down so then when we jumped they jumped as high so when they jumped they fell down and came down to us. We didn’t know the way back so Maylanna looked and she saw the way so she called out come this why so after that we went back up North and all lived happily ever after.

This is what we had to write about and my righting was about me and my cousins having fun in Samoa but they see something cool and they want to go there but they think of different things like scary things like monsters that lived in there. I hope enjoy reading about my narrative part 2. Here is the task we did today.